How was your competition in Malaysia? I hope you enjoyed it. I'm waiting for you to tell us about your adventure there.
Well, I've visited your blog and it's good to see some posts here. I just wish that you include your original reflections and journals. I wish to see your learning experiences each day reflected in your online journal. Talk about your meaningful moments in school and at home. The more you express yourself through writing, the more you become better in communicating your ideas. Focus on one big idea to talk about and from there, develop details that would support it.
I will be visiting youor blog again and I hope to see more improvements in your posts.
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Hi Hafizh!
How was your competition in Malaysia? I hope you enjoyed it. I'm waiting for you to tell us about your adventure there.
Well, I've visited your blog and it's good to see some posts here. I just wish that you include your original reflections and journals. I wish to see your learning experiences each day reflected in your online journal. Talk about your meaningful moments in school and at home. The more you express yourself through writing, the more you become better in communicating your ideas. Focus on one big idea to talk about and from there, develop details that would support it.
I will be visiting youor blog again and I hope to see more improvements in your posts.
Cheers!
dear lovely diary,
I learned about i was chosing poem i like that poem because i was happy to red the poem the name of the poen is digging up and thank you diary .
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